Scattered Leaves

I'm on time again! I am totally enjoying making those whispy-smoky thought clouds. And Silas' hair. I'll tell you a fact about that: the magic the Sprites have makes what hair they have wiry (they don't have any body hair except for eyebrows and hair on their scalp and such, kinda like Native Americans), and anyone who lives with them for long enough is affected by it to a milder degree. That's why Silas' hair is so sticky-uppy.

also, I think I may go back to adding the text digitally, since my writing still looks uneven. And Silas' running pose is too stiff. I need to draw from some movie stills.

PS, for real, I can use as much feedback as I can get, especially since this is my first comic ever. Any nitpicking at plot or art or storyteling is more than welcome.

EDIT: I eradicated all unnecessary lines.