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a younger Alberic and Charna by ~undead-faery:iconundead-faery:


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I was so ashamed of myself when I realized I hadn't ever posted this. Man. This is Velasco's parents when they were younger :) Not necessarily the best sketch, and Alberic's chin is a bit weak, but it shows a good feel for them as a younger couple.

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:iconmaranianthe:
You did a good job with the wispyness of his hair, but you could have translated better the values in her hair.

You've got a bit of a multi-stroking habit though. You want your lines to be as honest and confident as possible. Feel the paper, don't hack at it. Topography's coming along solidly though. Keep up the good work!

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~people spend 500$ for beef jerky with a zipper. That's just wrong!= Brad Stine

~"You can't land on the moon & say 'it's all sticky!" Eddie Izzard

~"God likes matter. He invented it.'' C.S. Lewis

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:iconundead-faery:
thanks :) I can definitely see what you're saying about the lines, though, especially with hair. What exactly do you mean by "feel the paper" though?
:iconmaranianthe:
good good. Keep practicing and observing others.

I meant be sensitive about the marks you're making. Multi-stroking is hacking at the paper like Norman Bates. Confident drawing takes sensitivity. :)

--
~people spend 500$ for beef jerky with a zipper. That's just wrong!= Brad Stine

~"You can't land on the moon & say 'it's all sticky!" Eddie Izzard

~"God likes matter. He invented it.'' C.S. Lewis

For a laugh: [link]

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